英文长难句的翻译如何做的更好？

 

写长难句一直是在同学们的作文表达当中比较头疼的一个问题，今天我们来练习一下再写长难句的时候，我们应该如何更好的表达自己的语言结构和知识技能？下面这些句子，同学们可以试着自己去分析翻译一下，然后再来对答案，我们来看一下我们的句子应该进行一个怎么样的翻译会比较好。

 
 
胡老师
毕业于爱丁堡大学，剑桥大学，悉尼大学访问学者。教授雅思托福考试，授课时长达到8000小时，学生提分率达到95%。
经常参加体育运动可以提高人们的自信心，这不仅对年轻人很重要，对老年人也很重要。
 
过度依赖计算器可能会对人们的心算能力产生负面影响，并威胁到儿童的智力发展。
 
许多女孩不愿意为男性在大多数行业找到工作，因为她们在高层晋升方面面临障碍。
 
温室气体排放等环境问题已经成为公众关注的焦点，因此应该实施一些规则来应对。
 
家长和老师应该尽量减少孩子看电视的时间，这样可以保护他们的视力，鼓励他们做户外运动。
 
艺术不属于学校的主要科目。
 
农村失业问题在一定程度上可以通过城乡转移（农村向城市转移）来解决。
 
经济衰退导致失业率上升，因为雇主计划裁员并拒绝雇用新员工。
 
由于经济前景不明朗，很多企业招不到新人，因此大量毕业生找不到工作。
 
一个国家的经济发展依赖于一定数量的年轻劳动力，但问题是老龄化社会对劳动力产生了负面影响。
 
Regular join in sports can improve people's self-confidence, which is important not only for young people but also for the elderly.
 
Excessive dependence on calculators may have a negative impact on people's mental arithmetic ability and threaten children's intellectual development.
 
Many girls are reluctant to find jobs in most industries for men because they face obstacles in high-level promotion.
 
Environmental issues such as the release of greenhouse gases have become the focus of public attention, so some rules should be implemented to deal with them.
 
Parents and teachers should try to reduce their children's time watching TV, which will protect their eyesight and encourage them to do outdoor sports.
Art does not belong to the main subject of the school.
 
Rural unemployment can be solved by urban and rural transfer (rural-to-urban shift) to some extent.
 
The economic downturn has caused unemployment to rise as employers plan to cut jobs and refuse to hire new workers.
 
Because of the uncertain economic prospects, many companies can not recruit new people, so a large number of graduates can not find jobs.
 
A country's economic development depends on a certain amount of young labor force, but the problem is that the aging society has a negative impact on the labor force.
 
通过对比自己翻译的句子和答案，据我们会发现，写得比较好的句子，一般使用了从句和复合句，并且会有进一步的定语从句状语从句啊，同位语从句等等的巨型的叠加和复合。
 
只有通过这种方法，我们才能够写出一个比较好的句子，因为在写作当中，我们是要尽可能的啊，去通过一个句子表达自己复杂的思想。那么针对于这些问题，很欢迎大家随时咨询我们A加国际未来教育的老师们.